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THE FALL LINE

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Synopsis
Derik Halvorsen was born brilliant—and broken. Raised in silence by a violent ex-military father in rural Montana, Derik never cried, never connected, never forgot. By sixteen, he could dismantle any system, crack any server, and understand evil better than any therapist who ever tried to study him. And then one night… he made his first move. When his father dies under mysterious—but eerily clean—circumstances, the police rule it an accident. Derik disappears. No leads. No trace. Just one new ghost in the system. But Derik didn’t run. He evolved. Armed with a list of names—abusers, traffickers, corrupt prosecutors—he begins executing brutal, calculated murders that look like suicides, accidents, or divine punishment. Every kill is a message. Every detail, a signature. He doesn’t murder for revenge. He murders for balance. As federal agents begin to catch on, whispers spread in the underworld—someone is out there correcting the justice system’s mistakes. A living algorithm. A myth. A nightmare. But Derik isn’t hiding anymore. He’s building something. And the deeper he goes, the more powerful enemies take notice—some who don’t want to stop him… and others who want to use him. Because sometimes, the only thing worse than a broken system is the man who learns how to perfectly destroy it. ⸻ Themes • Morality vs justice • Systemic failure • Psychological trauma • The mind of a killer • Cold logic vs emotional chaos
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Chapter 1 - CHAPTER ONE : THE FALL

Timestamp: 02:14 A.M.

Location: Halvorsen Residence, Outskirts of Whetstone County, Montana

Date: November 12th, 20XX

Subject: Event Zero

It started with footsteps.

Then the sound of water dripping from a broken pipe in the basement.

And then — silence.

Derik stood barefoot on the third step of the staircase, his right hand clutching a loop of piano wire so tight it left an imprint on his palm. His breath was steady. His heartbeat was… bored.

02:15 A.M.

He heard the scrape of boots drag along the wooden floor below. His father was drunk again. Third time this week.

Fourth bottle.

Derik's eyes didn't blink when he saw him—6'3", built like a steel trap gone to rust, skin sour with liquor and sweat. A man who used silence like a weapon and his fists like punctuation.

He waited.

02:16 A.M.

The old man muttered something incomprehensible, stumbled toward the stairs, grumbling about "Goddamn freak boy reading again."

One step.

Two.

Three—

The piano wire whipped around the back of his neck like a noose struck by lightning. Derik didn't scream. He didn't grunt. He leaned back, all his weight focused like the point of a scalpel.

The tension in the wire cut through flesh.

His father's hands scrambled behind him, clawing at nothing.

Eyes bulged. A gurgle.

Then a single crack—his spine giving way just as Derik let go.

02:17 A.M.

He didn't fall.

He collapsed.

Like a broken statue. One leg still twitching.

Derik watched him for exactly 11 seconds before kneeling beside the body.

He closed the eyelids gently.

And whispered:

"You were my first equation. And I finally solved you."

02:19 A.M.

He dragged the body up four more steps and threw it down again — this time headfirst. Skull met wood with a sound like split melon.

To the authorities, it would be an accident. Drunk ex-military man falls down stairs. No witnesses. No suspicion.

Perfect.

02:23 A.M.

He scrubbed the wire clean with bleach, flushed the rags, changed into fresh clothes, and took one final walk through the house.

His room, stripped of anything personal.

The basement, where his real life had begun.

The bookshelf with hidden files.

The laptop's hard drive, already burning in a trash barrel outside.

02:36 A.M.

Derik Halvorsen walked out into the mist and never came back.

There were no tears.

No second thoughts.

Only calculation.

This was not revenge.

This was initiation.

End of Event Zero.

Subject's status: Ghost Protocol Engaged.