SORRY AS I FEEL AS IF THE SECOND PAGE ESCALATED TO FAST, SO I MAY, AND MOST LIKEY WILL DELETE THE SECOND PAGE, AND MAKE IT THE THIRD PAGE.
Why?
BECASUE TO ME AFTER REREADING IT WHY THAT LAST TINE IN THE FIRST PAGE, WHAT SO SUDDENLY IS LILTHS REAL FAMILY GETTING IN TROUBLE, WHY DID JAMES SUSPECT HER, WHAT MADE LARA SUSPECT HER, AND WHY EVERYTHING ELSE?!
WHEN I GET IDEAS FOR WHAT HAPPENES NEXT, I SIT THERE THINKING TOO FAR, ADDING PEOPLE, AND THINGS THAT WON'T BE HEARD OF UNTIL WAY INTO THE BOOK, SO I THINK I WAS JUST TO HAPY, AND EXCITED TO SEND OUT THE NEXT PAGE THAT I DOVE RIGHT INTO THE CLIMAX, AND EVERYTHING, I WILL BE DELETING THE SECOND PAGE WHO IS LORELEI?// HE'S COMING FOR YOU , UNTIL I WRITE THE SECOND PAGE THE RIGHT WAY, WIL?/HCFY MAY OR MAY NOT BE THE THIRD PAGE, WE'LL SEE.
IN THE CASTLE, WILL BE THE NEW SECOND CHAPTER