Hello, though I doubt there are any people who actively read this, I decided anyway to write out my thoughts and explain why this novel went a bit wrong.
To start with, this being my first time writing and publishing anything online, I was a bit to enthusiastic when writing and exaggerated a lot of things in the story.
Such as; the mc's abilities (as in giving him way to many to start or with that I can't keep up haha),his backstory being very cliche and constantly going on about how he is emotionally numb and lacks the ability to express emotion without going deep into the reasons why. I was going to go into the reasons through flash backs in later chapters to kind of keep up a mysterious vibe, if you get what I mean.
Also the dialog and the personalitys of the side characters and potential antagonists might have been a bit bland as I don't think I put enogh detail into them as I should have.
Finally the world building, yeah I haven't really gone into this much and it's still in the early chapters so this is ok and I have a basic idea of how it is going to go, but again I haven't put enogh thought behind this and this can be quite easily changed later down the line.
Anyway, I still have like 20-30 chairs writen up in paper format so I will upload and edit them when I have like it and see how it goes I guess, also if I feel like I have gotten any better I might go back and re-edit the initial chapters.
Thanks to anyone who read it and I apologies for my shitty upload schedule.
That's all now, byeđź‘‹.